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Bluestarintears Administrator Lord Fabia member is offline ♥ Must love Emmy ♥ Joined: Jul 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 2,901 Location: right behind you Karma: 8,010New acceptance method!-beta testing « Thread Started on Feb 3, 2007, 5:31pm »
Yeah, so I don't just say accepted or anything anymore, I'm going to try something new. To see if it works, I am not going to give out a number, between 1 and 10 . Anything above a 6 is accepted, and below isn't. Also, if it is below a 3 , then best chances are you completely revise it. If not, if it's a 4 or 5, then probably just a few tweaks here and there. **Also, if you get lucky and revieve 3 tens in a row , then you no longer have to have me accept them, they can go straight to the board they belong in. --Good luck with this, it will be very hard to receive one, let alone three tens. For that I will be extremely picky, I mean Silvernail picky, Augustine picky. And if you knew them, you'd know how picky I mean.
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YellowbeltTiger Warrior member is offline Gir from Invader Zim is the BEST! Joined: Dec 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 510 Location: Why do you want to know??? 0_o Karma: 1Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #1 on Feb 3, 2007, 8:51pm »
sounds cool...*twindles thumbs just thinking of a way to get those tens*
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Lily Fabia's padawan Spiffeh Smiley Maker! ^.^ member is offline >=) BWAUAHAHAHAHA!!! Joined: Oct 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 814 Location: With Me, Myself, and I Karma: 101Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #2 on Feb 3, 2007, 10:24pm »
I see... Though I don't think I'll be making any more cats for awhile.
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Random Fallen Fabia's padawan member is offline Joined: Oct 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 1,421 Location: Japan!! ^__^ Yeah, I wish... Karma: 47Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #3 on Feb 4, 2007, 12:06am »
What about if we've already been told that we don't have to do IC's anymore?
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Bluestarintears Administrator Lord Fabia member is offline ♥ Must love Emmy ♥ Joined: Jul 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 2,901 Location: right behind you Karma: 8,010Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #4 on Feb 4, 2007, 1:01am »
Then you don't have to do IC's when you post them ^^
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tabbykitty GuestRe: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #5 on Feb 4, 2007, 6:01pm »
i have a perfect example of a 10 discripton:Quote: Description: Long flowing hair. Sweet-expression faces. Jaunty ear and toe trimmings.Her fur is smooth and always cleaned.Her fur is a mix of dark brown,black and gray swirls.Her paws look too big for her;her tail is short and very fluffy.Also her paw pads are light pink and black mixed,same as her nose.She is built big,lean and with long legs.Her oval shaped bright emerald green eyes with a band of gold completes this kitty.
Is that a good one?
Bluestarintears Administrator Lord Fabia member is offline ♥ Must love Emmy ♥ Joined: Jul 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 2,901 Location: right behind you Karma: 8,010Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #6 on Feb 4, 2007, 7:17pm »
Actually no, I wouldn't give that a 10. 9 probably, and for various reasons. First of all, the sentences don't flow too well, they're short, and sound choppy. Also, it constantly uses 'her', which you shouldn't use any word to start a sentence any more than twice in a row, even then it isn't very good. There are no spaces between the sentences, which gets annoying sometimes, and the word choice and sentence fluency could be better. I don't even think I could write a 10 myself, or if I did it would take me hours, perhaps even days, to get it throughly fixed and correct. I'm very picky when it comes to anything like that. Of course, if I ever get my book I'm writing published, then I'll be able to really criticize.
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Lily Fabia's padawan Spiffeh Smiley Maker! ^.^ member is offline >=) BWAUAHAHAHAHA!!! Joined: Oct 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 814 Location: With Me, Myself, and I Karma: 101Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #7 on Feb 4, 2007, 8:32pm »
o_o"
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YellowbeltTiger Warrior member is offline Gir from Invader Zim is the BEST! Joined: Dec 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 510 Location: Why do you want to know??? 0_o Karma: 1Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #8 on Feb 4, 2007, 9:19pm »
I got an 8!!! good for a silly twoleg, if I say so myself.
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Random Fallen Fabia's padawan member is offline Joined: Oct 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 1,421 Location: Japan!! ^__^ Yeah, I wish... Karma: 47Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #9 on Feb 6, 2007, 4:08pm »
T_T I got a 8.5 because of grammar...
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Lily Fabia's padawan Spiffeh Smiley Maker! ^.^ member is offline >=) BWAUAHAHAHAHA!!! Joined: Oct 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 814 Location: With Me, Myself, and I Karma: 101Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #10 on Feb 6, 2007, 6:06pm »
Hahah.
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Bluestarintears Administrator Lord Fabia member is offline ♥ Must love Emmy ♥ Joined: Jul 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 2,901 Location: right behind you Karma: 8,010Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #11 on Feb 6, 2007, 6:07pm »
well let me say this: your best chances at a higher score would be probably on the weekends, when I don't have school. Then I'm not all grr about it.
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~Dawn~ Leader member is offline Joined: Oct 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 433 Location: Right behind you o.o; Karma: 11Re: New acceptance method!-beta testing « Reply #12 on Feb 6, 2007, 8:29pm »
-taps fingers on the desk- Hmmm...
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